Susan Oak & Rodney E. Tyson
Proceedings of the 2nd Pan-Asia TESOL Conference. Seoul: Korea TESOL. 1999.
ABSTRACT
Research papers are
hard for students to write and hard for teachers to teach even when they
are written in the students' native language. Preparing a research paper
involves many steps, each of which may be confusing and time consuming.
This paper begins by discussing the unique problems and difficulties, but
also the advantages, associated with teaching English research writing
in an Asian context. The authors describe an approach to teaching Korean
university students to develop English research papers which requires groups
of students to work through each stage of the process as they carry out
an actual research project based on research questions and questionnaires
developed in class through carefully planned assignments and activities.
The final result is a class presentation and a written, referenced research
paper. While students report that they find such a project challenging,
they also consider it very useful, interesting, and motivating.
CHALLENGES INVOLVED IN COMPLETING A RESEARCH PAPER
Writing a research paper is very difficult, even for people writing in
their native language. That is one of the main reasons, no doubt, that
research and research writing are seldom dealt with in composition classes
for EFL (English as a foreign language) students at Korean universities.
Furthermore, although the distinct nature of writing in a foreign language
as opposed to writing in one¡¯s native language has become apparent (Silva,
1993), with few exceptions (e.g., Brightwell, 1998; Cornwell & McKay,
1998; Crowe & Peterson, 1995; Thein, 1999), little has been published
about the specific problems of teaching English research writing to EFL
writers in Korea or other Asian contexts. In addition, although an Internet
search in any of the major search engines yields literally thousands of
Web sites and pages related to teaching student writers to carry out research
and write effective research papers in English, few focus on teaching these
skills to non-native writers of English.1
In one textbook that does deal specifically and very effectively with the
process of teaching ESL (English as a second language) students to complete
a "research essay," Spack (1990, p. 171)2
lists some of the "numerous challenges" involved for the writer:
1. To find a topic that engages your interest
2. To formulate a question that your readers will answer
3. To decide which research materials you will need
4. To evaluate the ideas and information in different sources
5. To synthesize (combine and integrate)
6. To examine various sides to an issue
7. To establish a position in relation to the topic
These challenges combined with the more practical problems of teaching
students such necessary skills as summarizing, paraphrasing, and quoting
from cited texts as well as standard research paper formatting and referencing
may often seem insurmountable to writing teachers in Korean universities,
particularly given the relatively small amount of emphasis placed on teaching
students to write anything beyond the sentence level in many university
English programs (see Tyson, 1999). Still, this paper points out the advantages
of teaching research and research writing in Korean universities, and describes
a collaborative approach to teaching them that students find useful, interesting,
and motivating.
ADVANTAGES OF TEACHING RESEARCH WRITING
As mentioned above, research writing is seldom taught in Korean universities.
It is, however, a useful "real-world" skill, since many of our students
will be required to produce pieces of writing that involve carrying out
research in their future jobs or academic pursuits. Even for those students
who do not end up in situations where producing research texts is required,
moreover, learning the basics of research writing in English may be helpful
if their future jobs involve reading and understanding research reports.
Because doing research and writing a research paper necessarily strongly
links reading and writing, learning to write a research paper may help
students to understand published research better and to read more critically.
A research project nearly always involves a greater investment in time
than the sentences, paragraphs, and short essays typically assigned in
Korean university composition classes. As students are working on extended
research projects that continue for several weeks or perhaps even an entire
semester, teachers can still focus on all of the individual writing skills
normally covered in a writing class, but the larger project provides a
natural and realistic opportunity to use those skills immediately and in
a meaningful context?that is, to put all of the parts together for the
finished product. In addition, writing a research paper requires students
to get involved with English texts outside of the classroom, which may
have long-lasting positive benefits. While doing the necessary research
for their projects, many of our students have expressed surprise to find
out that there are so many interesting and useful materials written in
English available in libraries and on the Internet that they can access
and understand easily on their own.
All of this allows students to get much more deeply involved with a relevant
topic than is possible with shorter assignments, which we have found to
be interesting and motivating for them. Rather than writing a series of
short, unrelated compositions just to practice writing skills, they are
learning about a topic of personal interest, developing useful organizational
skills, and learning to work through a challenging process to produce something
that they may have believed was far beyond their ability. This often leaves
students with a true sense of accomplishment at the end of the course.
ADVANTAGES OF COLLABORATIVE WRITING
Although both of the authors have also had success with teaching research
writing to ESL and EFL students working individually, more recently, we
have found that allowing students to work collaboratively in pairs or small
groups (up to five or six students per group) has many advantages. For
one thing, students tend to feel more comfortable when they are asked to
start such a large project if they know they will have the support of one
or more classmates. Working in pairs or groups also provides a greater
possibility that individual members will bring more of the technical skills
necessary for completing the project (e.g., word processing, other computer
and Internet skills, the interpersonal skills involved in interviewing
strangers).
Most importantly, perhaps, Hirvela (1999) points out that students working
in pairs or groups have the opportunity to learn a great deal from each
other as they work together to complete the project:
Through collaborative group production, students experience valuable opportunities to improve their ability to read and write because the ongoing community orientation of this approach enables them to draw upon the strengths and resources of their peers while sorting through their own growing knowledge of L2 reading and writing (p. 12).
In fact, Murray (1992) suggests that if one of our goals is to help our
students to prepare for "life outside the classroom" (p. 100), opportunities
to experience collaborative writing are vital. Wilhelm (1999) provides
a concise explanation of why that is true:
Whether the context is EFL, ESL, or teacher training, collaborative learning strategies can be applied to help language learners make more effective transitions to real-world settings, where they will draw upon their experiences and skills to communicate, negotiate, build consensus, cooperate, and learn with others (p. 18).
INTRODUCING
STEPS IN THE PROCESS
If the necessary steps involved are not presented in manageable pieces
over a reasonable period of time, writing a research paper for the first
time can seem like an overwhelming task. It is important, then, to let
students know at the beginning of the process exactly what will be expected
of them and to demonstrate and introduce each stage of the project through
examples and in-class practice of the skills involved. Although we cannot
demonstrate how we have dealt with every stage of the collaborative writing
process in this short paper, the handouts in Appendix B and Appendix C
provide examples of how the organization of an English research paper might
be introduced and how the concept of developing a research proposal can
be turned into a collaborative in-class activity, respectively.
The information in Appendix B ("Organization of an English Research Paper")3
can be covered quickly at the beginning of the project as an overview of
what is expected. After that, the handout serves as a rough outline for
the paper and a kind of checklist for each group to refer to as they complete
each section. The handout in Appendix C ("How to Write an Essay Proposal")4
first introduces relevant vocabulary and provides an explanation of the
process of writing a research proposal along with an example of a completed
proposal. If possible, it is also a good idea at this point to provide
examples of finished research projects if available or at least to suggest
a few possible topics and research questions. You then might want to brainstorm
possible topics together as a class before having the class break down
into groups to start to work on their actual proposals.
CONCLUSION
Carrying out a research project and writing a research paper is a difficult
process. For EFL students, it can often seem impossible at first. A collaborative
approach to the problem has advantages for both students and teachers.
Students tend to feel more comfortable working with peers and can also
share and learn useful skills from one another while completing the project.
Teachers can benefit by having fewer projects going on at the same time,
having fewer papers to correct, and expecting students to take more responsibility
for their own learning. In the end, students have the opportunity to learn
and practice the set of skills necessary to carry out a very complex process
in a way that virtually always ends in successful products. We have found
this to be motivating for students, satisfying for teachers, and very enjoyable
for both.
NOTES
1Appendix
A contains a list of Internet sites that include some information that
may be useful for teaching research writing to EFL students, although only
one (the last one) is specifically intended for EFL students.
2A
new edition of this textbook has recently been issued by a different publisher,
i.e., Spack (1999).
3The
handout in Appendix B was developed by Johanne Blackburn, Peter Kipp, and
Susan Oak.
4The
activity in Appendix C was developed by Peter Kipp and Susan Oak.
THE AUTHORS
Susan Oak is an instructor and English Program Coordinator at Ewha Woman's University in Seoul. She has an EdM in Second Language Acquisition and Bilingualism from Harvard University and has taught ESL/EFL at the university level in the United States and Korea for a total of 18 years.
Rodney E. Tyson is
an associate professor at Daejin University in Korea where he teaches in
the Department of English Language and Literature and the Graduate Program
in English Education. He has an MA in ESL and a PhD in Second Language
Acquisition and Teaching from the University of Arizona and has taught
at universities in the United States and Korea for a total of 14 years.
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Brightwell, G. (1998). Writing up research: Using an on-line course to make classroom teaching more learner-centered. ThaiTESOL Conference Proceedings 1998, pp. 3-4.
Cornwell, S., & McKay, T. (1998). Making the transition from writing short essays to long research papers. The Language Teacher Online, 22(4). Retrieved September 4, 1999 from the World Wide Web: http://langue.hyper.chubu.ac.jp/jalt/pub/tlt/98/apr/cornwell.html
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Hirvela, A. (1999). Collaborative writing instruction and communities of readers and writers. TESOL Journal, 8(2), 7-12.
Murray, D. E. (1992). Collaborative learning as literary event: Implications for ESL instruction. In D. Nunan (Ed.), Collaborative language learning and teaching (pp. 100-117). Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.
Silva, T. (1993). Toward an understanding of the distinct nature of L2 writing: The ESL research and its implications. TESOL Quarterly, 27(4), 657-677.
Spack, R. (1990). Guidelines: A cross-cultural reading/writing text. New York: St. Martin's Press.
Spack, R. (1999). Guidelines: A cross-cultural reading/writing text. Cambridge: Cambridge Unversity Press.
Thein, M. M. (1999). Facilitating student research. ThaiTESOL Conference Proceedings 1999, pp. 56-57.
Tyson, R. E. (1999). The power of multiple drafts in writing classes. The English Connection, 3(4), 1,6.
Wilhelm, K. H. (1999).
Collaborative dos and don'ts. TESOL Journal, 8(2), 14-19.
APPENDIX A
Some Useful World Wide Web Resources
A Brief Guide to Informal
Survey Research for Introductory Composition Students
<http://omni.cc.purdue.edu/%7Epmatsuda/english/resource/survey.html>
Daily Grammar Mailing
List
<http://www.dailygrammar.com/>
Eleven Rules of Writing
<http://www.junketstudies.com/rulesofw/>
Garbl's Writing Resources
Online
<http://pw1.netcom.com/~garbl1/>
A Guide for Writing
Research Papers Based on MLA Documentation
<http://cctc.commnet.edu/mla.htm>
A Guide for Writing
Research Papers Based on Styles Recommended by the APA
<http://cctc.commnet.edu/apa/apa_index.htm>
Indispensable Writing
Resources
<http://www.stetson.edu/~rhansen/writing.html>
Ohio University Writing
Resources for English Language Learners
<http://www.tcom.ohiou.edu/OU_Language/english/writing.html>
Purdue University Online
Writing Lab
<http://owl.english.purdue.edu/>
Using the Internet
for Research (FAQs)
<http://www.purefiction.com/pages/res1.htm>
Writing and Research:
On-line Resources
<http://www.clet.ait.ac.th/EL21OPEN.htm>
APPENDIX B
Organization of
an English Research Paper
SECTIONS: Begin each new section of your report on a new page. Be sure to have a section title at the beginning of each section (except the cover page).
1. The COVER PAGE should contain the title, typed in capital letters. It should also list the names and student numbers of the writers. Do not put the words "cover page" on the cover!
2. The CONTENTS page should list the various sections of your project and their page numbers.
3. The INTRODUCTION pages should contain background information about your topic, a description of the focus of your research, and a very short statement of your study¡¯s results. It must include the information that you included in your research proposal. One possible way of organizing this section is as follows:
i. Begin with a general description of the topic. Add any background information you think your readers will need to understand your research. Be sure to cite your sources as you explain this background information!4. The PROCEDURE pages should contain a description of the type of research you did to achieve your aims.ii. Continue by describing your group's research aims, including the main research question(s) you noted on your proposal and secondary questions, if you have them. For example: "Our main aim was to examine/investigate/analyze/compare . . ."
iii. Discuss the necessity for investigating the questions noted above, as mentioned in your research proposal.
iv. Add a very brief summary of what your project actually proved or accomplished.
5. The DESCRIPTION OF FINDINGS pages should show the results of the research you described in the previous section. I recommend arranging this section according to the same organizational pattern you used in section 4.
i. You may arrange this section topically (describing the type of research you did to answer each of your research questions) or by type of research (interviews, surveys, etc.). However, regardless of your organization, you should mention both why you did each type of research and exactly how you did it.6. The ANALYSIS pages should be an in-depth, intellectual discussion of your research results. (You can think of it as a long, detailed essay based on all the research you revealed in previous parts of your paper.)ii. You should also mention the limitations or problems you had with your research. If you think, for some reason, your surveys were unreliable or your library research was insufficient to answer one of your questions, you should mention that fact in this section.
iii. Add a very brief summary of what your project actually proved or accomplished.
i. You should discuss the issues you raised in your introduction in more detail, make connections between the different parts of your research, and reveal whatever new thoughts and conclusions you have come to as a result of your research. You can include specific examples and quotations in this section to illustrate and develop your points.7. (Optional) If your analysis section was very complicated, you may want to include a separate SUMMARY section.ii. Be sure to cite your sources properly!
8. The BIBLIOGRAPHY pages should contain a list of every source you cite in the rest of your paper, in alphabetical order. Do not include every source you looked at, only those you cite. Use the following format:
(Internet page--include a date if the page has one)APPENDIX C
Anderson, Emily (no date) ¡°Jean-Marc Gaspard-Itard¡¯s Homepage.¡±
http://www.pen.edu/~cuega/wild.htm (accessed 9/17/98)(book)
Clark, Mark W. (1977) From the Danube to the Yalu. New York: Quadrangle Books.(article)
Kim, In-seok (1989) ¡°Korean Language as Pragmatic-based Discourse.¡± Korean Language Education, vol. 1, pp. 12-24.(article without an author--use the title)
"Korea-Japan Fisheries Talks Concluded." (1999) The Korea Herald, April 22, 1999.(interview)
Oak, Susan (1999) personal interview (March 11, 1999).
How to Write an Essay Proposal
Example:
| Objective
Topic Research Question(s) |
Cellular phones
Which cellular phone service (including PCS) provides the best service? |
| Necessity | These days, cellular phones have become a major part of the daily life of most Koreans. We are exposed to almost constant advertising by the various companies providing cell phone service, and offered a wide variety of special deals by each company. But we don¡¯t have any way of comparing their deals and advertising claims. This research can identify a few common standards such as cost, clarity of calls, ease of use, and quality of after-service, and show how well each company is meeting those standards. |
| Method
Library Research Internet Research Surveys Expert Interviews Observations/
|
Look for explanations
of the different types of service (including the difference between cell
phones and PCS); look for related articles or statistics; read company
publications.
Look for details of service on company Web sites or communications industry related sites. Survey 15 subscribers to each service (011, 016, 017, 018, 019) about cost, clarity, ease, after-service, and general satisfaction. Contact service representatives for each company and ask specific questions (after doing basic research as noted above). Make calls from each of the following locations during business hours, using each service, to test clarity: the Ewha campus, the subway, the Pukhan Mountains. |
Exercise: Write
down your group's ideas for a research proposal here.
| Objective
Topic Research Question(s) |
Cellular
phones
Which cellular phone service (including PCS) provides the best service? |
| Necessity | These days, cellular phones have become a major part of the daily life of most Koreans. We are exposed to almost constant advertising by the various companies providing cell phone service, and offered a wide variety of special deals by each company. But we don¡¯t have any way of comparing their deals and advertising claims. This research can identify a few common standards such as cost, clarity of calls, ease of use, and quality of after-service, and show how well each company is meeting those standards. |
| Method
Library Research Internet Research Surveys Expert Interviews Observations/
|
Look
for explanations of the different types of service (including the difference
between cell phones and PCS); look for related articles or statistics;
read company publications.
Look for details of service on company Web sites or communications industry related sites. Survey 15 subscribers to each service (011, 016, 017, 018, 019) about cost, clarity, ease, after-service, and general satisfaction. Contact service representatives for each company and ask specific questions (after doing basic research as noted above). Make calls from each of the following locations during business hours, using each service, to test clarity: the Ewha campus, the subway, the Pukhan Mountains. |
Related Article:
Simpson, J. M. (1998).
Research writing in a foreign language. EnglishTeaching Forum Online,
36(2), 34. Retrieved April 21, 2001, from the World Wide Web: http://exchanges.state.gov/forum/vols/vol36/no2/p34.htm