Rodney E. Tyson
Daejin University
English Language
Education, 21.
pp. 205-214. October 2000.
Introduction
Language teaching in most Asian countries, "usually employs a traditional
product-oriented, examination-centered approach, with a strong emphasis
on grammar" (Pennington, Brock, & Yue, pp. 227-228). Kong (1996) explains
that Korean college students' perspective on learning in general involves
"a considerable amount of careful, painstaking translation of text" along
with "a great interest in grammatical analysis [and] a strong desire to
be corrected whenever a mistake occur[s]" (pp. 114-115).
These attitudes have a direct effect on how writing is usually taught in
Korean universities. Ahn (1995) notes that writing, in general, is often
neglected in teaching English in Korea, so that there is little attention
paid to teaching students "to write at a paragraph or discourse level"--again,
because grammar and translation are considered "the most important components
of language teaching" (p. 73). The traditional focus in teaching English
composition in Korean universities, then, has been almost entirely on ¡°grammar
rules and the production of grammatically correct sentences," which has
resulted in few Korean college graduates who are able to write "a coherent
English paragraph, let alone a longer essay, a business letter, or a research
paper" and an attitude among Korean students that writing in English is
"boring and hopelessly difficult" (Tyson, 1999, p. 1).
The Writing Process
Proett and Gill (1986) suggest that writing is "a complex intellectual-linguistic
process involving the recursive application of a wide range of thinking
skills and language abilities" (p. 1). If so, obviously, teaching students
to write understandable sentences is only one small part of teaching them
to write in English. We need to set our goals much higher. One approach
to teaching composition that can help us to do that is often referred to
as "the process approach" or "process writing." The goal of this type of
approach, according to White and Arndt (1991), "is to nurture the skills
with which writers work out their own solutions to the problems they set
themselves, with which they shape their raw material into a coherent message,
and with which they work towards an acceptable and appropriate form for
expressing it" (p. 5).
One study has found that "[ESL] teachers actually have strongly differing
ideas as to what process writing is" (Caudery, 1995, p. 1), but Brock (1994)
explains that when a process approach is used, "students first explore
a topic, write drafts, [and] receive feedback from classmates and the teacher"
(p. 52). When a process approach is used, the teacher often evaluates not
only the final product, but also considers the work done by the student
in the process that created it. White and Arndt (1991, p. 7) further point
out that "the writing process is a recursive one, in which the activities...do
not occur in any fixed sequence in the act of creating text." Finally,
White and Caminero (1995, p. 323) explain the value of focusing on the
process of writing for students:
Group writing assignments, peer editing, and the multiple revisions allowed in process writing serve to demystify the task of writing in a foreign language. In addition, students are provided with valuable opportunities to learn from each other.
Korean Students' Attitudes
I have studied the attitudes of Korean university students toward the use
of various process-oriented activities and techniques in composition classes
for several years. My data gathered from students of various levels of
proficiency at two different universities using a variety of mainly qualitative
research methods suggest that some of these techniques can be used very
effectively in Korean university English composition classes (for details,
see Tyson, 1997, 1998a, 1999, 2000). Although students often come into
my composition classes expecting feedback mainly on structure, for example,
at the end of the course many often report benefiting from both instructor
and peer comments on content and organization as well as structure and
seem to appreciate the opportunity to learn to correct their own errors.
Especially, students have reported over and over again that having the
chance to develop longer essays through multiple drafts is both useful
and motivating. Some typical student comments collected at the end of composition
courses in which the process approach was used include the following:
Revising my homework several times was very useful for me. Because I could have time to look for materials concerned my essay in internet or magazines, and I could think about my topic deeply. As a result, I could strength my essays with other people's suggestions and materials I found.In addition, although students understandably often express a strong desire for feedback and correction from the instructor, I have found that Korean students also find peer-editing activities useful when they are presented in an appropriate way (Tyson, 1998b). They also appreciate the chance provided by a process-oriented approach to read other students' compositions and share ideas with classmates both in prewriting discussions and during the process of developing their essays:I had taken another course related to English composition when I was a freshman. At that time, in returned papers there were no professor's comments but only grade. I did not read my essays again but I just checked my grade.... But in this time, I could make my works better through professor's comments and my endeavor to improve.
[W]hen the teacher said we would write three essays during the semester...I said to myself, 'I can't'...[but] when I think about my two essays I've already written, I am proud of myself.... [N]ow English writing is not longer fearful to me, but I am ready to try to write an essay in English with pleasure.
I realized [having other students read my work] was the best way to know one's faults and mistakes, such as wrong expressions, lacks of conclusions and examples. So, the advices of friends and [my instructor] helped me to modify my essays properly.Students also report that they enjoy having their work "published," that is, made available to readers other than just the instructor. I have found that when students know that their work will be read by their classmates, and perhaps even by readers outside the class, they are encouraged to revise more and edit more carefully. Positive feedback on their work can also provide motivation and confidence to student writers, as well as help them to develop a sense of the importance of writing for a real "audience," as the following quotes illustrate:The most useful thing in this class was to read other's essays. The weakest points in my writing which I couldn't find when I read my essay were found by reading other's essays.
I got confidence about writing in English from having my work published on the Internet and the collection of essays. I thought the essays was important more than simple assignments for grades.Finally, I have found that students often enjoy writing more when they are given the chance to write in multiple drafts and receive frequent feedback from interested readers. They often express a sense of satisfaction, or even excitement, when they are finally able to say what they really wanted to say in a foreign language, as the following quote illustrates so eloquently:Not write to make understand yourself, but to make understand others...is something I have learned.... This is the basic, key point in writing."
Writing is hard work! But frankly I waited the day I received my former writing. To find faults in my writing is one of the most interesting things in this class as well as the most useful. I appreciated the opportunity of correcting my errors. Through it I felt my writing improving and gaining better structure and grammar. I learned writing is a course completed through correcting. And in writing again, I could express my opinion more exactly. Even what I thought I knew is actually what I didn't know. In writing, I come to know.
Conclusion
The emphasis in English composition courses at Korean universities has traditionally been on the correct use of grammar with little regard for other higher-level concerns such as organization, development of ideas, and writing for a specific audience. As a result, students are often not well prepared for the kinds of writing tasks they encounter in the real world. In this paper, it has been suggested that use of "process-oriented" techniques in Korean university composition classes can help students to develop the skills necessary to express themselves effectively in written English, while at the same time increasing their confidence and motivation to write. Following are some practical suggestions for using these techniques based on my experience:
Note
This work was supported
by the Daejin University Research Grants in 1999.
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